http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=896226
It's rough....but it's in the right direction though it can definitely be worked upon..imagine someone that can actually sing is singing it using good equipment ;)
Dead parking lot
Twilight of dawn
This space
Fills up
You go home and pray
Wait through the day
And return
Tonight
You're back on the scene
It's back in your blood
You realize
It's the way it's suppose to be
You'll sit there and say
He'll be here today
And return
Tonight
Summer was gone
Moved from the street
Concrete
Plans never ever fail
You might wonder why
You behold a pale face
Just return
Tonight
It's Thanksgiving day
It's Thanksgiving day
Thanks
"Ockham's razor would suggest I put it there"
Yeh, it's got potential.
Intriguing lyrics.
Pleasant melody.
It's the rock that gives the stream its music . . . and the stream that gives the rock its roll.