It has been a while... had a lot to do with my school and stuff...
The last couple of months I've recorded a couple of songs, one of them is (almost) finished and is available at my soundclickpage at http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/matthijsypenburgmusic.htm , it's called The One and Only.
You listen and judge!
Greetz
In the end, the love you'll take is equal to the love you make - Paul McCartney
everything is to mashed together... * not my type of music * but its as if your fighting, or whoever is doing vocals is fighting over everything else, while everything else is fighting with each other......
this probably doesn't make sense but well some people should know what i mean
It's 15 Till And She Has The Other 45 In Her Mouth.
I think you mean the mix is dense and some of the instruments/vocal are stepping on each other by playing the same notes in the same octave -- in particular, the keys and vocal seem to do this.
I think this tune has a lot of pop potential, but requires some arranging and mixing work.
-=tension & release=-