Here's my attempt at Higher by Creed. The chorus is supposed to be louder but I didn't want the neighbors to complain so it's the same volume as the rest of the song. I'm 17 so how can I improve my voice? Sorry for the poor quality. It was recorded on my MP3 player microphone.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nRfAFLTRGh4
I'm a New Zealander and it's hard to get the accent exactly right - In fact, I can't understand the words I'm singing towards the end of the song!
to be honest it is difficult to judge the merits of your voice when it is not audible. the recoding is very low. it sounds like you are speaking more than singing. the lyrics are unintelligible, but I get a sense of personality or attitude. that's good.
work on belting it out. warn the neighbors. keep it up.
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To be honest you need so much improvement in you singing and voice. If you are not from India then try to find out the indian singing culture hints. India is the country of music and arts. So you can learn lots of from here. And one important thing is do practice everyday morning for improvement of singing and voice. And next time sing alone and then record voice so a person can judge you.