http://ragngautr-kindred.org/audio/rob/I_need_you.mp3
I Need You
Wanting to hold you
Your so far away
Wanting to see you
just to know your ok
What will it take now
For you to break
What must I do
To show you
I need you
I need you
I can still hear you
It won't go away
So deep within me
Your here to stay
I know you can feel me
Cause I feel you too
So what must I do love
Cause
I need you
I need you
Wrote and recored this today... let me know what you all think.
Rob
Each word led me on to another word,
Each deed to another deed.
-Havamal-
I can't listen to your song maybe I am doing something wrong but the page opens blank. Are you looking for singing advice or songwriting advice? This topic might be best put into the "Hear Here" section or perhaps you are looking for feedback on lyrics in which case the "GN Songwriting Club" would be better.
It's not easy being green.... good thing I'm purple.
Hello Rob,
I like your song. The guitar has a nice catchy rhythm. The vocals blend in.
It's a nicely balanced and relaxed song. Well done mate.
