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sCrApI
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Hey! just started working on a new song. I'd really appreciate if someone could share his honest opinion about it with me.

I know that some notes sound a little flat - i suck at singing - (and the sync between recorded guitars could be better :p ). It hasnt actual lyrics yet, it's just some random gibbering that was meant to sound like english language.


   
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PEAVEYUSA
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I like it only your guitar is drowning out your voice turn it down


   
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morbe
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+1 vocals dont cut through the mix. sounds good though, I'd like to hear the final product.

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Enigmaticuske
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Yeah it's nice, although your guitar sounds too high (maybe put some Low chords in it (F, E maybe) and it gets a little messy through the end. A bit much at the end. But very nice job nonetheless!


   
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DoReMiFa
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I can't put my finger on it, you sound like someone but I can't remember who at the moment. I admit I didn't listen to the whole thing, but I like your voice from what I heard.

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Enigmaticuske
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I'm listening to it again and actually I think there's really something there. I really like the first 2 minutes of the song. Real catchy, even sounds a little bit like radiohead in my opinion. I think if you would make like some kind of bridge and chorus for it to give the song somewhat more variation it would be really good. Lot's of potential.

But I'm very green, beginner, so I'm just giving my 2 cents with my little knowledge. ; )


   
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DoReMiFa
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YES! Thom Yorke from Radiohead!

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EzraplaysEzra
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It's very good - all the way through. great feel - the outro solo was perfect, a little campy and odd and understated - perfect for the tune. Vocal performance was an A , rhythm guitar was A-. solo guitar was an A. Reminded me a lot of early Frusciante, like "Niandra Lades and Usually Just a T-Shirt" - one of my favorite albums BTW.


   
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