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I love a cautionary tale :D :D that was a good story, you built the story line nicely, didn't see the ending coming :twisted: :twisted: very cool 8) -the dog
that is something i wish i wrote. cool song :)
Keep away from people who try to belittle your ambitions small people always do that, but the really great ones make you feel that you too, can become great.
--Mark Twain
this is so cool! i really enjoyed it and the ending was awesome seriously...you should be real proud of this! :)
Thank you, all, for your positive feedback. :)
hi. just wanted to let you know I agree with what has been said. it's really good with a surprising ending :D
cheers,
bluenightangel
"oh, eventually it will break your heart" - anders wendin
Hi Val
Saw where this was heading - very well done.
Bob :)
You are what you eat, eat well
Thank you, all, for your comments. I enjoyed writing this and am really pleased that you liked it. :D
