Waiting in Line
Waiting in Line
Standing right here
Waiting for a sign
Could take about a year
Mercury Sunset
Mercury sunset
Silvery sinking light
Mercury Sunset
Soft focus backlight
formerly "new writer" until someone said they didn't like my name
Hi Patina
I like Mercury Sunset simple yet striking. Â Waiting in Line seems incomplete to me I 'd be tempted to make some minor changes as follows:
I'll be waiting in Line
Standing right here
I'll be watching for a sign
Even if it takes all year
Good stuff though and if you haven't been formally welcomed to SSG then welcome it's good to have you here.
Bob :)
You are what you eat, eat well
hi bob:
i've been here quite a lot. i used to call myself new writer. and i was thinking of changing the last line to something about dog years.
formerly "new writer" until someone said they didn't like my name
Well I'm shocked - mind you a songwriter by any other name (you get the drift).
Dog years - hmm! - could be interesting
Bob :)
You are what you eat, eat well
