I've been looking for a reason to finish this song. this week seems perfect. Please comment
Subliminal Visions
Thoughts are skewed
Over my past timeline
Reminders of my youth
And troubled times behind
Now I've grown up
And these visions haunt my sleep
Repressed Memories
Images of forgotten pains
Surpressed fantasy
Feelings come to me in dreams
Skeletons in my closet
From times long since past
Too Full I can't close it
Why must my pain relapse
I want to Grow up
Stop the visions that Haunt my Sleep
Repressed Memories
Images of forgotten pains
Surpressed fantasy
Feelings come to me in dreams
There's a good basis for something here. But why not tell us what it is that's in the closet? There's not much to connect to as it is. Don't tell people how you feel. Make them feel how you feel. Share an experience. Give us a story. I like it. I want more.
-Marv
