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Week 25 - Elegance

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(@eleganceofgrace)
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Here goes,

1.
I've given up on giving in
Rising up against being struck down

2.
Im taking a trip to heaven tomorrow
Visiting old friends that I once knew


   
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(@bluenotefla)
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I've given up on giving in
Rising up against being struck down

These are full of potential a lot of power in these words I would love to see how it turns out.

Life is not what you did. It's what you are doing.


   
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(@tattooed)
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Joined: 20 years ago
Posts: 41
 

Can I change the order of lines, I don't know and I like rhyming but many don't.

I've given up on giving in
I can't keep up falling back
Rising up against being struck down
I have to start fighting back

I'm taking a trip to heaven tomorrow
This illness is taking me
Visiting old friends that I once knew
I've accepted my destiny


   
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