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 Gina
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The writer's block has really hit me lately! But I'll give this a try:

Song #1

32 Heartbreak Avenue is where the lonely people meet
But I've got better places to go
And I ain't gettin' stuck on that dead end street

Song #2

It's a nice place to visit
But I wouldn't want to love there

(that's a play on words of "It's a nice place to visit, but I wouldn't want to live there.")

"And if you don't know where you're going, any road will take you there." -- George Harrison


   
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32 Heartbreak Avenue is where the lonely people meet
But I've got better places to go
And I ain't gettin' stuck on that dead end street
I'll forget I ever met you
But I won't forget that you're a cheat

It's a nice place to visit
But I wouldn't want to love there
It's a cold and lonely place
No one seems to care


   
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Your song #2, Gina, is great!  I think there's a lot of possiblities in that altered cliche...

Did I try to love there and fail?

Do I have bad memories of that place?

Or am I warning someone else of a girl there that broke my heart?

How about this poor old town that if I fell in love there I'd have to stay there and I'd rather live somewhere else, thank you...

Anyway--very thought provoking!


   
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