My first attempt at a song. It's a slow and bluesie number
Verse 1
I walk thru life's yard
Jumping from patch to patch
Sometimes it gets really hard
I've got the blues to match
Verse 2
I lost my job, just last month
It doesn't seem long enough ago
You see, I only liked it once
That place was a freaking hole
Chorus
Be careful, they all know you
Everywhere you walk, you walk as one
Don't step in number two
Yeah, look out for number two
Verse 3
The voices let you know you're not alone
You told your sister you're an only child
I Don't pick up that phone
The voices have gone wild
Chorus
Verse 4
The doctor says I'll be OK
They tell me it's true
I think their right, but only yesterday
I landed, in number two
Chorus
Roy
"I wonder if a composer ever intentionally composed a piece that was physically impossible to play and stuck it away to be found years later after his death, knowing it would forever drive perfectionist musicians crazy." - George Carlin
Hey, neat blues song Parker. I really like it. First, I liked how you played off of the saying "Looking out for number one" but I also liked how you played this line:
I think their right, but only yesterday
I landed, in number two
into it.
Good stuff
Geoo
“The hardest thing in life is to know which bridge to cross and which to burn” - David Russell (Scottish classical Guitarist. b.1942)
Hey, neat blues song Parker. I really like it. First, I liked how you played off of the saying "Looking out for number one"
Geoo
Thanks for the kind words. My first attempt. Was nervous.
That saying you mentioned was inspired by the late-great Rodney Dangerfield. The end of the movie Back To School.
Roy
"I wonder if a composer ever intentionally composed a piece that was physically impossible to play and stuck it away to be found years later after his death, knowing it would forever drive perfectionist musicians crazy." - George Carlin
