I'm aching, your breaking up
There's a feeling I can't switch off
Beautiful Skies, your pretty eyes
Together they would be just right
Beautiful Skies, my beautiful lies
Only you can make me right
Coz you deserve something more
You deserve so much more
Words just aren't enough for you
I'm Crying as I'm flying away
I miss you and I hope your ok
A falling sky, my messed up life
Give anything to just feel fine
A falling sky, tears in my eyes
Give anything to say I'm alright
Coz you deserve something more
You deserve so much more
Words just aren't enough for you
I wish I could
I wish I could
But wishing's gonna do no good
I really like what you wrote. The only thing that lyrics/songs need to make them good, is the ability to awake emotions. Well, that's what important to me. And you've done that here. These lyrics make me feel melancholic (melancholy? :?), which means it's well written ^^
Well done!
Helllloooooo old friend
This is really , really well written , would have loved to read another verse but hey it's not there .
You have done very well
congrats
cheers
L.K :arrow:
Aghhhh
Not only am I a senior citizen
I'm now a bloody senior member
Are you people trying to tell me I'm old or what ?
over 700 posts ( I really do need to get out more )
