The "fly on the wall" doesn't really seem to fit with the rest of the song...But I really like the fly having broken wings instead of a bird. "Bird wi...

Wow! Thanks for responding, and for the welcomes! I'm really glad to be here!pbee, you're right about the tense changing. I didn't really notice while...

Whoops...I feel pretty stupid now. I don't know the difference between past tense and past participle! :oops: I usually pride myself on my grammar, ...

Cool song; I love the "scalded cat" simile. I have to point out, though, that the past tense of run is "ran"...so, it should be, "I ran, not walked." ...