I like it. It has a nice flow to it. Not sure exactly what it is about, but that makes it good, you can apply your own life to it.for V2 try:(2) She a...

Ok here is version 2. Gamblin ManThey meet at the county fairHe was a sweet talk'n man.With fine cloths and jewels.He promised her the world.<ch...

Thanks for the feed back.Dave I like your suggestion for the chorus, it sounds much better. I originally was working with 4 line verses, but could not...

Couple of minor nits: How about : The wind is parched instead of The wind is wet. Parched earth fits in with being tough to dig.Last v...

I'm new to criticing so bare with me :).First off, I like it. The line in the chorus: "Form the horizon" just does not seem to fit. How about:I wish...