Ska, I relistened to your songs, and checked out some of other poeples songs on the board (gamefaq that is). I think maybe they are a bitjealous :-)...
First off, good lesson, but you wanted some feedback, so here goes :-).Big point, when you record switch yourself around so that there is light infron...
First off I have not played with the Vox Tonelab, but I have a GT6.I'll give you some information about the GT6. The GT6 is really like having a bunch...
I think it is a bug in the board software. I've seen this on other boards. Looks like a off by one error in counting number of pages per thread to me....
kyoun1e, Ok, read the manual on M-Audio Duo and checked out Guitar Tracks (looks like a newer version of Cakewalk Pro Audio 9 that I use). So, you d...
Two questions I have is what M-Audio device do you have? From your description I am guessing a M-Audio MobilePre. If this is what you are using, then ...
Thanks for the comments. Here is version 2. Give me some feedback. Bob: Thanks for the line "My face at every turn" that works so well.I might need to...
Ok I'll take a stab at it. Keep in mind I'm still learning :-)I would use the first verse as the chorus, it reveals to much about the song too soon. K...
I like it... really like the lines:My mind's a little blurry, My conscience: uncurled. Can't really think of anything to add to it.Would like to he...
I agree with Jamir, very good song.Also I stumble over the "that" in the second to last line, but songs seems to flow better if it is gone.for fixing ...
Good song. Nice use of imagery. The third verse does not seem to fit the rest. Industrial exteriors, theatrical interiors Just seems out of place. ...
I like the outro, how you show that this scene will be repeated in just a short time. I don't see where you switched tenses.Verse 2 needs some help:As...
I liked the song. Good use of imagery.Nick or Dave will point out: No word list :-)Only thing I found was the line:Hiding under his mask his yellow gl...
First off time is not running out on you. At 14 you have whole life ahead of you. So what is the rush?For specific help, I would recommend participati...