Good man James.I'm glad it went down well in class. One thing I love about kids is the BRUTAL honesty. If they say they like it then they must do.than...

Very catchy chorus and i like the verse, it has 'blink 182' kinda fun feel to it, keeps it interesting for the kids. I might use this in class for win...

thanks very much lads! im not driving in korea but the human traffic in the subway stations would give anyone a meltdown :evil: :lol:

Hi nick!I have to say thank you so much for the encouragement, means a lot. :D So all the suggestions for the first verse are good, i'll edit them in...

thanks a million! this one poured out pretty much in one go, ill have to see what people think in terms of editing and what not. hope you get a chance...

summed up a lot of frustrations nicely there. I like the 'talk at me' me line, as oppose to 'talk to me'. gives me a good image of the singer scribbl...

Hi lads Thanks for the listen and the encouraging comments. Yea Vic id like to be able to put a little solo into i've only sarted using audacity since...

Good job! quite moving lyrics. I found myself getting fairly engaged with it. special respect for the lines:Dominoes will always fallThe way they are ...

wow! liked that a LOT :D great tune, impressed with the production (I'm gonna have to figure out how to do all that eventually) , and the songs in my...

james thanks a million for all the analysis.yea i see what you mean about the time line. when i was writing it i was in the mind that the secret hadnt...

Hi lads.Cheers for taking a look and thanks for the input.I think James that you were right about changing 'well' to 'Yes'. flows better to me now so ...