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Re: Y10 W42 Death Row Cookin' MP3 ADDED

Suggestion: Consider focusing in on one feeling from the singer.....right now it seems a mix....the singer wants to be nice by adding the cigarette an...

12 years ago
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Re: SSG10-Week42 Cold Water

thats really good james, haunting and funny is a hard one to pull off but i think youve done it man

12 years ago
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Re: Y10 W42 - Cousin Nate(cut him with a blade)

I like the chord progression in the chorus it has a pretty intense build. might be an idea to try scream the 'and i feel bad' line just to see how it ...

12 years ago
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Re: Y10 W42 Death Row Cookin' MP3 ADDED

thanks a million for the comments and the time! hope you enjoy listening to it and please offer any suggestions if you have them!cheers,Ben

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Re: SSG Y10 W26 "The cold cold rains of home"

Hi James!Thanks a million for the read and the comments. you're right the whole timeline of it is messy at the moment i'm going to have to nail down w...

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Re: Y10 W25 - That Old Cortina.

Thats really lovely Vic nice one, i had the guitar in my hands after id read the first verse, started strumming away, the lyrics just sat right with m...

12 years ago
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Re: Yr 10 Wk 17 - deeaa 'The Engine of Vengeance'

Hi!I think you have a strong start here, you've done a great job of painting the scene and describing things. there could be a very intense build up i...

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Re: SSG10-Week17 Pre-Song Notes (Works in Progress)

Hi James,seems like you have a fantastic setting here, tons of details just waiting to be cornered and caught within your selected subject. youve alwa...

12 years ago
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Re: Year 10 week 16

thanks for having a look guys.Yes David i might ask the gf to jump in one of these days, she's a lot better at the comedy end of things and i think my...

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