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Joined: Aug 24, 2007
Topics: 6 / Replies: 12
RE: First song and I need some help!

hey this is pretty good. I'd just like to say that the first two verses are def my favorite.For the lines that you'd like to change, just wait for the...

17 years ago
RE: If you're a dream.

hey, this is pretty good. It's just really choppy and needs some revisitingfor example:This dream keeps coming back to meA little different each time,...

17 years ago
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