Lacuna Coil. Are they on Earache Records?

wow. wow. wow.and here i thought it sucked.i likey this forum!!!

This is SO funny. i have no idea if it's good or not, as a lyric, but it cracks me up.

i'll give it some more work, but it probably won't be right away. thanks for the suggestions.

I like the idea of this. just needs to be tightened up a bit, i think.

Me likey. This sounds pretty good.

i dunno. Maybe something soft and moody?

Hello Saundra:I'm in an editing mood this morning. Don't be offended or anything. Just some ideas to tighten up your original which is very good.They ...

Just a couple of ideas for you. I like to edit!They know who I am At least they think they do I'm a captured man But they don't have a clue  Chorus A...

It's hard to find time to do the assignment every week and practice the guitar too.

No suggestions or comments before this drops back to the page below?

i think so. i've changed it. thanks.

Amethyst  They know who I am Blue eyes shine behind a shade of sadness Black hair, skin fair Closing out of lost world madness  They know where I've...

Hi nick: thanks. i think i'll work on it some more in the next day or two. i think you're right about that third line. i didn't notice it before. i'l...