Hi James!Whoa, the work you put into this!! :P Love how the melody picks up with the fourth stanza. #4 and #5 sound great to me, probably also becaus...

Thanks, Vic!! :D :D :D 7 years, my word, I'm getting old :lol: Cheerio,straycat.

Thanks, James, I missed posting, too! :D Just don't know where my head is sometimes. Probably out on Antarctica nowadays.This assignment is right up...

Vic!! :D I love the atmosphere you create here, especially here: And kind of drift towards the railway tunnel,Shelter from the rain under the subway ...

Aw, James, this is a great song, and very touching, too!some random thoughts:A party clown with no jobCan't do this aloneI wish you were here Love thi...

hi!thanks for the music :D been a while since i've listened to the cure. your suggestions would work well, but i was thinking more of sth like :-Dit...

maybe the verses need to be more explicit then.. spoilers: was thinking of sb. having become homeless, or aimlessly walking through the streets all da...

Why did you change it in the first place? Too many syllables? Rhythm reasons? .. seems to me that "Caught you sleeping with my alibi" is very close to...

:wink: I like the re-writings, makes it tighter. Just one thing- if you shorten the alibi line like that I'm not sure it comes across the way you had...

i got my jar of chocolate chip cookies and am reserving a seat next to Ken :D love the alibi+ lullaby rhyme! also the "you had your choice of men / b...