WannabeHero04
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RE: Sink Or Swim Revised
I think that between verse 3 and 4 another chorus should be added, and some more lines should be added to the last chorus, you know? well, i was wonde...
18 years ago
RE: Soaring (Help needed)
I think it flows along pretty well.....but i think it needs a more hooking chorus...
18 years ago