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This song was written to be more of a harder rock song with a mellow refrain and heavy verses. Please leave a reply good or bad. I Still think this could use alot of work. Thank you for your time.

2 Sided Man

Cannot fight this
The insanity
Now I've realized
The psycho is me
Slowly growing
I still can't believe
Overpowered
By the psycho in me

There always was something more
Inside this life of casualty
Behold the final truth upon us
The chronic reality

There is no other way out
Although it may seem
To kill the hidden person
That lies deep inside of me

Cannot fight this
The insanity
Now I've realized
The psycho is me
Slowly growing
I still can't believe
Overpowered
By the psycho in me

The flame is lit the time is coming
Before the monster inside me
Grabs a hold of life itself
And will never let me be

See the smile on the face
Of the demon born to be
Without even knowing
The demon is me

Cannot fight this
The insanity
Now I've realized
The psycho is me
Slowly growing
I still can't believe
Overpowered
By the psycho in me

Gotta stand to release
Gotta take back control
Have to find the one
Who dug me deeper in this whole
The actions are mine
And mine alone
it's not my fault
I have a two sided soul

Cannot fight this
The insanity
Now I've realized
The psycho is….

Got Metal?


   
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(@alangreen)
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Not bad, methinks. I had the "Cannot fight this...psycho in me" as the melow refrain and I think it works fine.

Best,

A: -)

"Be good at what you can do" - Fingerbanger"
I have always felt that it is better to do what is beautiful than what is 'right'" - Eliot Fisk
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(@pierson)
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See the smile on the face
Of the demon born to be
Without even knowing
The demon is me I love this line. Probablly because I can relate from one of my songs:

"An image painted on the surface
reflects and brings me to my knees.
A tear slips out from the knowledge
that this beast is inside of me."

That's from my Beauty in the Beast.

I really like this song. And, Jesse, I'm still kinda drunk from last night. Keep it up!

There's a thin fine line between hate and rage.
Now watch the line be crossed and break!


   
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