Darn, you stole my idea! I guess I should have wrote my song earlier. But, I think this topic belongs to you.Keep it up!

I liked the song. As anna said, lots of people can relate to it. I would throw in a thrid verse. Something a little more personal to go out with.Keep ...

This was deffinitely a fine piece of writing. As everyone else has already mentioned, great imagery. Make sure you play this one loud!Keep it up!

Thats killer. Great imagery and stuff. Keep it up!

Glad to be back!

ok thanks for the info. It explained a lot and now i see how it fits with the assingment better.I would also like to see a sequal to the song. That'd ...

I do like the "My job, all alone" for the title, but most of my songs have the title in the chorus. I like to try to name it something that would brin...

Wow. This one I don't think you should be regreting later. It has sort of the same meaning of "Wait and Bleed" by Slipknot, if you've ever heard it. y...

It sounds too much like a generalisation, a horoscope reading which could be true for anyone who reads it. Did you see my vision fade inside a crowded...

I'm sorry to hear she left. Lots of good emotion here. Some of the rhymes seemed a bit forced, like you were trying to express something that would be...

Great stuff. Everything you described reminded me not only of a vampire but of a succubus (a demon in the form of a woman that sucks the life out of m...

I thought the song was great. Good imagery and it was great how you used the broken glass as a metophor. One thing I saw as a problem:while looking at...