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Joined: Nov 22, 2004
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RE: Year 4 Wk 46 If I Could Build...

Darn, you stole my idea! I guess I should have wrote my song earlier. But, I think this topic belongs to you.Keep it up!

16 years ago
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RE: New Song

I liked the song. As anna said, lots of people can relate to it. I would throw in a thrid verse. Something a little more personal to go out with.Keep ...

16 years ago
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16 years ago
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RE: SSG 24 - Marv

This was deffinitely a fine piece of writing. As everyone else has already mentioned, great imagery. Make sure you play this one loud!Keep it up!

17 years ago
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RE: My Heart Spilled Before the Eyes of The Crows

Thats killer. Great imagery and stuff. Keep it up!

17 years ago
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RE: Stones

Glad to be back!

17 years ago
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17 years ago
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RE: Week 23: Brain Damaged

ok thanks for the info. It explained a lot and now i see how it fits with the assingment better.I would also like to see a sequal to the song. That'd ...

17 years ago
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RE: week 23: untitled

I do like the "My job, all alone" for the title, but most of my songs have the title in the chorus. I like to try to name it something that would brin...

17 years ago
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RE: Week 23: Brain Damaged

Wow. This one I don't think you should be regreting later. It has sort of the same meaning of "Wait and Bleed" by Slipknot, if you've ever heard it. y...

17 years ago
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RE: Broken Pain

It sounds too much like a generalisation, a horoscope reading which could be true for anyone who reads it. Did you see my vision fade inside a crowded...

17 years ago
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RE: Week 23 ( no winged Angel )

I'm sorry to hear she left. Lots of good emotion here. Some of the rhymes seemed a bit forced, like you were trying to express something that would be...

17 years ago
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RE: Year 4 Wk 22 - Empress of Darkness

Great stuff. Everything you described reminded me not only of a vampire but of a succubus (a demon in the form of a woman that sucks the life out of m...

17 years ago
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17 years ago
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RE: Broken Pain

I thought the song was great. Good imagery and it was great how you used the broken glass as a metophor. One thing I saw as a problem:while looking at...

17 years ago
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