heya, this is quite an old song of mine...but everyone was posted songs and i felt guilty for only posted two...
i wrote this for a friend when she got married, its her wedding song and my present to her :)
(written from the viewport of her talking to her husband)
A Whisper in the Chaos
Looking for a place to hide away
When the world
Begs too much attention from me
A single light still shining bright
You are the one
Who gives me comfort and shelter from the storm
Of this place
And this time
It's more than we're expected to bear
Sometimes all I want is
To close my eyes and fall asleep
And you be there for me
When I wake up
You're a whisper in the chaos
A light on my horizon
You showed me where to go
When I had nothing left
Just like diamonds who
Through much pressure
Are made beautiful
And so aren't we all the same
I look at you so gratefully
I've found the person who
I'm supposed to be
Imagine times when just you and me
Can sit on the beach
And watch the past being washed out to sea
So now that's gone
Just look ahead
Towards the wonderful times yet to be had
And when I sleep
I dream of a time when I'm awake
And you are always right there by my side
You're a whisper in the chaos
A light on my horizon
Just like diamonds who
Through much pressure
Are made beautiful
And so aren't you the same
You saved me now
Before all this came crashing down
Around my feet
And pulled me under once again
I need you now
And we will never be apart...
bump...?
Hey CC, I did read this the other day with the intent of posting a reply but somehow it just didnt happen :oops:
I'm having trouble keeping the rythm or imagining music for this; do you have anything already?
The lyrics are great; my only problem is with the line
You're a whisper in the chaos
I get what you are trying to say, but to me a "Whisper in the Chaos" gives me the idea that it is hard to hear, which I think is the opposite of what you are going for. That said, I can't come up with any suggestion for a change at the moment!
I love the lines;
Imagine times when just you and me
Can sit on the beach
And watch the past being washed out to sea
great imagary there. If you have music, would be good to hear it recorded :)
Pete
ETD - Formerly "10141748 - Reincarnate"
thanks, the idea is that out of the whole mess and noise of the world theres one small thing that leads you through, so thats where the whisper and chaos come from.
yeah its got music, but i dont know where the recoding is :S the chord progression is boring aswell!! il see if i can find it