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ANOTHER LOVE, ANOTHER LIFE

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(@impossibleprincess)
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Look at me now
What do you see
Just broken vows
And history
I guess it's the way
Of love these days
Only promises pretending
Never any happy endings

It's the way
It's these times
So much pain
Too many goodbyes

Another love, another life
Just one more tear left to hide
Another love, another life
Another chance to see the light

Look at yourself
You are torn in two
There's nothing left
Just the usual blues
I guess it's the fate
Of love these days
Only disappointing tries
Never finding love for life

It's the game
It's the times
Nothing remains
Only goodbyes

Another love, another life
Just one more tear left to hide
Another love, another life
Another chance to see the light
Another love, another life
More memories to fade with time
Another love, another life
Another reason to ask why

You'll never get to heaven if you're scared of getting high!


   
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(@lotto-king)
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Posts: 777
 

hi

I like this very much

keep up the good writting

cheers

Aghhhh

Not only am I a senior citizen

I'm now a bloody senior member

Are you people trying to tell me I'm old or what ?

over 700 posts ( I really do need to get out more )


   
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(@mezlay)
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Posts: 37
 

Thats was really good I liked it alot. I really like the second verse(If thats the verse). except for the very last line not sure what it is but when I read it it sounds a little bit off the
Never finding love for life

but all in all I really liked it.


   
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(@musicmaniac221)
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Joined: 21 years ago
Posts: 148
 

i like this one...I hope your actually still on guitar noise to get this reply...i really like this song. get some audio to it, I'd love to hear!

Do what you love, love what you do
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-Nick


   
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(@impossibleprincess)
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Joined: 19 years ago
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i like this one...I hope your actually still on guitar noise to get this reply...i really like this song. get some audio to it, I'd love to hear!

Can't write music or melodies, can't play any instruments... :(
So I guess I'll have to find someone else to do that.
But I'm glad you like it!

You'll never get to heaven if you're scared of getting high!


   
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(@cooker)
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Joined: 19 years ago
Posts: 112
 

Hi IP..I liked this..has a melancholy feel....a few suggestions:

Another love, another life
Just one more tear left to hide
Another love, another life
Another chance to see the light ...

maybe this on the last line..one more chance to see the light or another chance to be the bride.....

and then on:.....

I guess it's the fate
Of love these days
Only disappointing tries
Never finding love for life..

how about..finding love - for always...or... in the usual ways....or...in unmeaningful ways...or...(finding love) in a meaningful way

hope I didn`t ruin it for you with my suggestions...as I re read it..it could work the way it is....very nice tho...write on cooker

You can sleep when you`re dead!
"and baby all you need...is just a little more love"


   
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