Refine the means to see your face
See the crowds before me smile
Yet I am alone inside myself
I've been alone awhile
Look back to where I was
Happiness symphonically hung
Remember the times of bliss and see
How my soul lightly sung
For now interpret these dreams
Of lost causes and starvation
For one day I will rise again
And heal these lacerations
Before I can live again and
Free my soul from this drowning
I need to remenisce the shattered feelings of
My soul and its crumpled crowning
But one day I know I'll come again
Grasp the memories from mud
Roadside I'll be alone again
It's destined in my blood
These feelings and emotions will fall
When I see again your face
Happiness and love will bloom
In this forgiving place
Intact will I wait here then
Until you wander home
For imprisoned in this glass castle
I am always alone
I can't figure a beat for it, but it's my first attempt.
hi and welcome
your first attempt is pretty darn good
cheers
Aghhhh
Not only am I a senior citizen
I'm now a bloody senior member
Are you people trying to tell me I'm old or what ?
over 700 posts ( I really do need to get out more )
wow...very moving...great job...
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-Nick
hiya, yes i really enjoyed your peace especially this verse:
But one day I know I'll come again
Grasp the memories from mud
Roadside I'll be alone again
It's destined in my blood
the only part i had a problem with was this..
Look back to where I was
Happiness symphonically hung
the word symphonically (however good the word is) its too long and interupts the flow if you see what i mean but thats the only part!
