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(@anonymous)
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This song is inspired by someone that thinks they are all high and mighty. Someone who does nothing more than tell me lies. I got fed up enough with him to write this song.

[verse 1]
You won't be straight with me
When I want the truth you flee
You won't give me honesty
Or respect my integrity
You blow me off with haste
Talking to you is a waste

More lies, more excuses, more bullcrap, it must be a disease
But I'm not listening until you come crawling on your knees

[chorus]
You think you're an angel
a god
a hero
a titan
You think I'm blind as a bat
And think you're all that

But you're nothing but
a jerk
a nothing
a coward
You're nothing but a prick
And nothing but a stupid dick

[verse 2]
You make stupid excuses
To cover up your abuses
You treat me like scum
You must think I'm dumb
Treat me like a human being
Lies are all that I am seeing

More lies, more excuses, more bullcrap, it must be a disease
But I'm not listening until you come crawling on your knees

[chorus]
You think you're an angel
a god
a hero
a titan
You think I'm blind as a bat
And think you're all that

But you're nothing but
a jerk
a coward
a nothing
You're nothing but a prick
And nothing but a stupid dick

[solo/interlude]

[chorus]
You think you're an angel
a god
a hero
a titan
You think I'm blind as a bat
And think you're all that

But you're nothing but
a jerk
a coward
a nothing
You're nothing but a prick
And nothing but a stupid dick


   
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(@crank-n-jam)
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Posts: 1206
 

Knowing the type of music you like, I could see that song working well. Played to some fast, heavy metal tune I think it would work. At least that's what I pictured as I read it.

Jason

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(@zaiga)
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Joined: 18 years ago
Posts: 64
 

Poor Richard ;)

Very angry, explicit, in-your-face lyrics. I could never write something like this, because I tend to write more, say, metaphorical lyrics, but I can see it working with heavy metal music behind it. It flows very well, and it is well structured. Good job.


   
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(@barnabus-rox)
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Posts: 2957
 

isn't it funny how the sensors pick up words and leave others like prick but I'm sure you didn't write Richard but the English shortening of that word like d1ck ????????

Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am


   
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(@rag_doll_92)
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Posts: 254
 

I love it, it's AWSUME

you write good, I know i'd listen to a song like that :)

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(@nolongerme)
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Posts: 475
 

Awesome song OWA!


   
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