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(@guitargeek)
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I spoke to my friend today
It was the first time in weeks
She told me about you and what you've been up to
And it ruined my day
We talked about it for a while
I couldn't seem to leave the subject
I know you shouldn't be stuck on me still
But that's all I've ever seen
You aggravate me to the bone with things that I don't need to know
I wish you'd leave me alone
Every single word you say somehow all just sounds the same
But they still shock me anyway

So I said never again
I think this should end here and now
I'm gonna delete every detail about you
Find some new information
I think its all going ok
Coz I found a friend in myself today
So maybe you should give this a try
But that's all I ever seem to imply
You aggravate me to the bone with your so sarcastic tone
I wish you'd leave me alone
Every single word you say somehow all just sounds the same
But they still shock me anyway

This is the end of the road
Its been quite strange to know you
There are some memories that I'd never change
But we cant all stay the same
I think I'm gonna be just fine
Somehow better off without you
And I don't hate you I just need to move on
Thanks for being in my song


   
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(@guitargeek)
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come on people!


   
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(@lostbeggining)
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Hey, i like this peice...i think theres some good strong points and makes a very good 'leaving' type song..but its almost as if its been that way for a while and this is the 'final straw' so to speak....i like it..If i had to change something id probably just see if you can tidy up the sentance structure....As the sentance length is a bit confusing..but part from that....good song

Keep it up!

Rain Shadow


   
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