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Crimson Wilting

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(@dillydally)
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Crimson Wilting

V1

A vase full of Crimson
Engulfed in the sea of tears
Time has its effects
To which it mirrors

Chorus

The tears have stopped flowing
The crimson is now wilting

V2

Drop after drop was wasted
From full to the top
To dry at the bottom
No more to be wasted

Chorus

The petals are drying
The stem is sloping

V3

The Crimson Petals All Fall Off
Never Showing Life Again
One Last Tear To Hit The Ground
And No One Around To Feel It

Chorus

The tears have stopped flowing
The crimson is wilting

By: Jacob Tubek

It's 15 Till And She Has The Other 45 In Her Mouth.


   
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(@dillydally)
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It's short because I took it from my SSG Assignment, which probably turned out bad as usual, as my songs =D but it's always good for the constructive critizism on this website.

It's 15 Till And She Has The Other 45 In Her Mouth.


   
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(@dillydally)
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Ack

It's 15 Till And She Has The Other 45 In Her Mouth.


   
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(@dillydally)
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1 Year Anniversary.

It's 15 Till And She Has The Other 45 In Her Mouth.


   
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(@twistedfingers)
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1 Year Anniversary.

happy anniversary :)

Life is not a journey to the grave with the intention of arriving safely in a pretty and well preserved body, but rather to skid in broadside, thoroughly used up, totally worn out, and loudly proclaiming -- "WOW--What a Ride!"


   
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