New song alot of metaphors in here that say something entirly different than what they mean lemme know what u think
the tractions has faded we cant slow down now
theres a see of faces and were on in the crowd
our allignment is off and were drifting more east
away from the safer side of the street
where the halos have turned from a gold to pale gray
nobody speaks since there is nothing left to say
because whats left to say when all anyone says
is how we ae all lost and left for the dead
in the end we all end up food for the worms
waiting in line until its our turn
for the doctors and lawyers to say ok
his time is up carry him away
and the politicians decide its ok to pull the plug
this side of the street turns its head and shrugs
at the wife who once loved and the boy who once dreamed
of being a politician who could turn the rings back to gold
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Nice song, had to read it a few times to get all the meanings! Only thing I would change is that your 3rd verse(?) seems have much shorter lines than the others. Or is a kind of spoken bridge to the song?
Would love to hear / know what music goes with this!
(oh, verse two last line "is how we ae* all lost and left for the dead" *typo ae = ARE oops! :P)
That last line feels a bit squashed, but it's fine otherwise.
Got anything we can listen to?
Best,
A :-)
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yea theres music here http://www.soundclick.com/spencerbeasley
sry about the typos its alot different than stuff i normally write,
anyways lemme know what u think of the mp3
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I liked the extended acoustical intro to the song, really eases you into it! Gr8 song, what do you use to record yourself? I've only got a crappy mic and it never sounds like that! (Or is that just my playing......lol) :P
Good job
i used a really really crappy computer mic and adactiy but i didnt feel like multi tracking the vocals and guitar so i did the entre rythym guitar and vocals in one take and theres a little small solo thing at the end that lends in with the song nicly and i use a second track to get that. I dont know how i get good quality like i do, but the only things thats bad is that my vocals always coem off very hushed and quiet so that stinks par sey. o well. im sure if u concentrate and dont play to loud youll be bale to get good quality from your mic.
chec out my music
http://www.myspace.com/spencerbeasleymusic
pm if u like it or send me a message on myspace
oooooooh love it.. i really adore that inbetween picking.. very ballad-ish
