First song I've written a while and the first song I've been proud of in even longer. It's about dealing some time I've spent dealing with social anxiety and a bit of depression.
You can listen to it here: http://soundcloud.com/geekman3232/everybodys-seen-the-light
Everybody's Seen The Light
Swim through a sea of faces
Everyone looking at me
Watch as my world erases
I'm just casing after what's left
Feels like everybody's seen the light
But I must have been born without sight
Rooms full of drinking and fun
I am the only one who won't enjoy the night
Alone, I go for my run
Think about everyone I've left in my life
Feels like everybody's seen the light
But I must have been born without sight
Sit by the glow of my electronic fire
Oh, I know you'll comfort me now
Time is passing me by
And I ask why I care anymore
Feels like everybody's seen the light
But I must have been born without sight
Thanks for taking a listen. Let me know what you think. :)
I like it a lot.
Great voice and a captivating tune that complements the chord progression.
Hope you'll upload more of you songs.
It's the rock that gives the stream its music . . . and the stream that gives the rock its roll.
Agree with KR2 210%. Absolutely awesome. I think you have to be able to relate to a song to really enjoy it and this one hits me like that! And like KR said, the chord progression, melody and lyrics are meshed to perfection. Great voice too.
Immediately I picture a group like "Train" doing this song. Or if we're lucky, you've already recorded more songs with this kind of emotion and you're sending out a CD to be mastered and replicated for worldwide distribution as we speak (or type). :D
I agree, the song and delivery are professional grade. Good work, keep 'em coming. 8)
Like a bird on the wire,
like a drunk in a midnight choir
I have tried in my way to be free.
I don't know if I can add to what's already been said. So, I'll say: I whole-heartedly agree with the others.
Take care
