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(@blacktears343)
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Joined: 19 years ago
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Trying to be perfect is not a question
only an answer and im just like you.
I was all you need but soon youll know just were im going.
Youll never know me
And Im just another teenage fuck up
One more sory and ill steal just one more kiss
I promise to miss you
just close your eyes and im only gone for a moment
its all my fault and ill take all the blame.
But damn i just wanted you to be happy
Now i just a tear soaked note
and im on the tip of your tounge.
ill leave you as you left me
scared and alone
and still i can hear you say
"forever is forever"

<3 Jes


   
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(@death_to_theory)
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very good jes.....only a few spelling errors and maybe this line"just close your eyes and im only gone for a moment "could be changed from"a moment" to "an instance"


   
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(@death_to_theory)
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very good jes.....only a few spelling errors and maybe this line"just close your eyes and im only gone for a moment "could be changed from"a moment" to "an instance"


   
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(@death_to_theory)
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very good jes.....only a few spelling errors and maybe this line"just close your eyes and im only gone for a moment "could be changed from"a moment" to "an instance"


   
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(@blacktears343)
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Joined: 19 years ago
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Yeah I forgot to go back and see if I typed anything wrong lol I dont look at the screen or keys when I type most of the time... Thanks... its not that good though... its very hard to understand I think lol... like if i didnt know what I was writing about i would think I was crazy :D

<3 Jes


   
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