This song I wrote in about 20 minutes a few nights ago at around 2am. It's quite short, but I feel it suits the subject. I included the chords incase someone with a guitar on their lap right now wants to put the tune to it. All manners of criticism are helpful although please keep the "You suck go home" comments to a minimum. :D Thanks all.
C (x32010)
D (xx0232)
Em (022000)
Am (x02210)
Cadd9 (x32030)
VERSE 1:
C D
Hello there my darling
Em Am
this cold old heart of mine
carries with it scars
gathered throughout time
and though with you i start anew
i fear that i may fall
like broken legs, a broken heart
can't run if it can't crawl
CHORUS:
Em(heavy) D
Don't try to understand
Cadd9 D
Don't search cause you won't find
but love is not an option
with this cold old heart of mine
VERSE 2:
In a mist of tears you ask me
"What have I done wrong?
You said you'd always love me.
How can that love be gone?"
I give my mind, I spill my heart
but it stutters as it speaks
words can not explain the hurt
that's bottled inside me
Chorus Again....
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"Songs aren't written, they're re-written."
You suck go home! Nah only joking :P
I like it rhyming is good sounds catchy, can sing a melody easily. good work.
Jar...I like this...read this a few times and had this notion...
Hello there my darling
Em Am
this cold old heart of mine
carries with it scars
gathered throughout time
and though with you i start anew
i fear that i may fall (from grace)
like broken legs, a broken heart
can't run if it can't crawl (won`t walk, because it aches)...
and..
VERSE 2:
In a mist of tears you ask me
"What have I done wrong?
You said you'd always love me.
How can that love be gone?"
I give my mind, I spill my heart
but it stutters as it speaks
words can not explain the hurt (inside)
that's bottled inside me( and I,ve yet to set it free)...
don`t know your situation and I,m not sure if this is what your looking for, but this is in my opinion a good song and worthy of finishing/adding to it... :D cooker
You can sleep when you`re dead!
"and baby all you need...is just a little more love"
