Thanks Vic, I appreciate the criticism.I've been listening to the recording when I walk at night, and I wish I did rip a little more, especially durin...

Thank you for your criticism. I also thought It may be too long, and so I will take that into consideration when I record a finished version.As far as...

Thank you for the compliment, and the criticism.I think "Have I thrown it all away" sounds better then what I had, thank you very much.Once I get rid ...

Hey man, I just listened to your tune on Soundclick. I really like the style of music, very similar to my own. One of the few songs on Soundclick that...

I understand what you mean, in regards to pruning it for singing. I've never sung any songs the way I wrote them, unless of course I was writing with ...

Okay, I've read over your words about 4 times now, and I'm still trying to grasp what's happening. Here's what I depict from your lyrics:Someone in be...

The chorus will play more than once i'm sure. :D I just didn't write it out two times. Probably pretty standard in a Verse-Chorus-Verse-Chorus-Verse-B...

In no way am I trying crush anyones creative spirit. I was just posting an honest criticism. This made by assuming she didn't post her lyrics on here ...

I put some music to your lyrics and sang as I read, it flowed very nicely for the most part. If the lyrics were mine though, I would change ->Every...

A good first draft, with very good potential."If I could have anything I'd have your love, not he. "This is horrible. It's bad songwriting, and even w...