the story of a girl
v1
oh her life was simple
and ripped along the seams
she was on the edge of reality
and her long lasting dreams
v2
in a world that only she knew
she was lonely and cunfused
all she needed was some affection
all she wanted was some attention
chorus
this is the story of a girl
who was looked down on by the world
too shy to stand up and fight them
she wouldnt turn for help from friends
thanks for reading....gaz :D
"people laugh at me because im different...i pity you..because your all the same"
The chorus is cool. Verse 1 is too.
Verse 2 could also be a chorus if you wanted it to be.
The last two lines,
"all she needed was some affection
all she needed was some attention"
are what reminded me of a chorus.
Hope I could be some help...Ghost
"If I had a time machine, I'd go back and tell me to practise that bloody guitar!" -Vic Lewis
Everything is 42..... again.