ive been writing songs for about 2 years now...and i cant seem to get further than 2 verses and a chorus..then my mind kinda goes blank,does anybody else get this problem?
example:
sleepless night
see my life through open eyes
leave me here and stop the lies
break my fall please catch me now
im in need of help somehow
i hope the dreams will go away
i think about you everyday
but knowing you your never here
i want the thoughts to dissapear
shouting for help and no-ones home
sick of the thought of being alone
open your heart turn on the light
i cant bear the dark tonight..
thanks for reading....
gaz
"people laugh at me because im different...i pity you..because your all the same"
make your song progress...what you have layed "verse, chorus, verse" I assume is your foundation, now you build your song. There is no specific structure you need to use...throw your chorus in make acouple changes, then maybe add a bridge then add another verse. The point its you need to have content in your foundation, id consider that opener verse and chorus, to build off of.
Ill add a verse and an edited chorus line here for you...just off the top of my head built off your foundation.
see my life through open eyes
leave me here and stop the lies
break my fall please catch me now
im in need of help somehow
i hope the dreams will go away
i think about you everyday
but knowing you your never here
i want the thoughts to dissapear
shouting for help and no-ones home
sick of the thought of being alone
open your heart turn on the light
i cant bear the dark tonight..
i see these dreams are here to stay
cant force what takes shape
I know your never here
thoughts wont dissapear
I closed her eyes
and she told the truth
acting suprised when
Id told her i knew
(then maybe build up to something)
Her tides of deciete :twisted:
were washing the sands
of another mans shore
idk...just some extra verses off the top of my head building off of your 3 ....get the picture? :lol:
Live to play
Love to live
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love to play 8p
