just a song i wrote in about 2 minutes to vent some frustrations, sorry if its crap but i need to blurt!
HIM
You say be yourself so why are you lying
You say it's a drag so ill just keep on crying
Get your own identity
Stop stealing everything from me
Take your notes and take your clothes
And get the fu<k out of my home
Ill take it
Ill take anything
Just to get away
Away from him
He's a loser we don't need him
But he keeps coming back
You got a girlfriend but your still after me
You got it worked out so why are you blinding me
Get your own identity
Stop taking everything from me
Take your notes and take your clothes
And get the fu<k out of my home
Ill take it
Ill take anything
Just to get away
Away from him
He's a loser we don't need him
But he keeps coming back
He's always knocking on my door
He's always begging me for more
Why wont he leave me alone?
don't care what you've done
don't care what you've done
I don't wanna be your someone
I don't wanna be your someone
Well...that is a very angry song...but no not crap...might i ask...whose "we"?
Do what you love, love what you do
http://www.acidplanet.com
-Nick
kinda talkin to myself there!
Yes, this "we" is great!!!
the only thing I didn't quite like were:
"He's always knocking on my door
He's always begging me for more "
but that might just be me....
besides, the last lines really made up for it
"I don't want to be your someone"...
that's dead-on!!!!!
NO MORE THEORY!!
um...
KNOW MORE THEORY!!!!
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motz
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thank you i appreciate you comments, check out my other songs if youhave time!
