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(@m07zm4n)
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Hi,
Sorry, I haven't been here for a while.
What's up?
I'm rahter busy learning guitar right now
But I managed to write something new so here it goes:
(I got the "inspiration" after a rahter energy driven discussion, so it may sound a bit provoking, HA!)
I've written it rather fast, because the ideas have already been formed during the conversation. I just had to let them out :)
Please critique!

Lactate Mates

1)
You fit your lazy exercises
To your foolish own advises from the tale.
With a min usage of power
By 120 beats per hour's like a snail.

Your belt size just keeps growing
But you're working out too slowly what you can.
Skipping meals at evening
But dipping chips from morning dawning cans.

Preref1:
We gotta keep on running but don't know why.
We gotta keep on running like a retired guy
Who just keeps asking:

Ref1:
I move after I ate.
But not too fast so it feels fine.
I don't eat after eight.
Neither franchise nor the time.
I live correct, how did I get that fat?

2)
And everytime we're turning
We think that we're burning what we ate.
But the only thing we're building,
Are the lies that we might wield to estimate.

If you think you're going mainstream
I'm doing all the Malmsteem fast twitch plans.
You can stomp me as an outlaw
But my body you should take for reference.

Preref2:
We gotta keep on running but don't know why.
We gotta keep on running like a retired guy
Who just keeps yelling:

Ref2:
I just move when I'm late
But not too fast so it feels fine.
I rankle after eight.
Either franchise or the time.
I don't live correct, coz I am assessed to be fat.

3)
I think for once you've proven
You're a doctor of delusions for your mates.
It's true you have convinced me
And Schwarzenegger since he terminates.

I'm lifting heavy puzzles
But my mind keeps all the fuzz to comprehend
That my slow twitch fibres always
stagnate my lactate progress in the end?!?!

We gotta keep on running
We gotta keep on running – not too fast
We gotta keep on running
We gotta keep on running – I think I understand
We gotta keep on running – I think I understand
We gotta keep on running – I think I understand

NO MORE THEORY!!
um...
KNOW MORE THEORY!!!!

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motz
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(@guitargeek)
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:) this is really cool! you had some great lines in there, i wasnt soo keen on the first verse but it was excellent after that! i wouldnt of thought of writing a song like this so it was definitely interesting to read this!


   
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(@mezlay)
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I agree with guitar geek the begining was a little sketchy but as i kept reading It seemed to get alot better. It's nice I like it.


   
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(@m07zm4n)
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Thanks for the positiv critique!
Yes, you have to read into it, but I'm glad that it worked!
sorry for not replying in a long time and sorry for bumping that one up!

NO MORE THEORY!!
um...
KNOW MORE THEORY!!!!

<------>
motz
<------>


   
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