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(@barnabus-rox)
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I don't Believe

Chorus
I don't believe in Jesus ( Am )
I don't believe in God ( Em)
I don't believe in salvation (Am)
And I don't believe in love (Em)

I believe in the little things ( Am )
That make me feel so right (Em)
Looking at the stars at night ( Am )
In the dark and lonely skies (Em)

Verse

I'm just a lonely man (G)
Some may call a fool (C)
Life isn't always easy (G)
At times it's so cruel (C)

( I call this my bridgey verse )

i don't believe in heaven ( Am )
An I don't believe in hell (Em)
I don't believe in the after life ( Am )
Its's probably just as well (Em)

Back to a normal verse

I believe in the children (G)
With their beautiful smiles (C)
Always looking for guidence (G)
With in their innocent eyes (C)

Chorus x2
I don't believe in Jesus ( Am )
I don't believe in God ( Em)
I don't believe in salvation (Am)
And I don't believe in love (Em)

I believe in the little things ( Am )
That make me feel so right (Em)
Looking at the stars at night ( Am )
In the dark and lonely skies (Em)

I don't believe in Jesus ( Am )
I don't believe in God ( Em)
I don't believe in salvation (Am)
And I don't believe in love (Em)

I believe in the little things ( Am )
That make me feel so right (Em)
Looking at the stars at night ( Am )
In the dark and lonely skies (Em)

Outro

Idon't believe in miracles (C)
For I believe in your eyes (G)
I can't believe in your love (C)
And I won't believe your lies (G)

Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am


   
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(@canrock)
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I think in the part where you sing the chorus twice, you should just sing it once and your bridgey verse after. maybe. =


   
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 KR2
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Hey Trevor

I usually don't post on the Songwriting Club board but I saw your post . . .
and I hadn't seen you post in a while . . .
so I had to give your post a read.

This is really, really good.
I like the way you have put this together.
You've stated some *profound thoughts with some short, simple statements.
*(profound in that they cut to the crux of your existence)
And it gets better as the song progresses.
You've also picked four of my favorite chords for the song.
If you record this, would you post it on Hear Here so I can hear it there?
OK, I'll go back to my little corner of the forum.

I hope all is well with you,
KR2

It's the rock that gives the stream its music . . . and the stream that gives the rock its roll.


   
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(@barnabus-rox)
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Thanks for the feed back guys

Ken I like those chords as well coz I can play them :D :D :D :D

Here is a very rough , 1st take on it .....1Track --1 mic --1 Acoustic guitar and my horrid voice

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7165326

Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am


   
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(@chris-c)
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Hi Trev,

Good to see you around again. I agree with KR2 - your songwriting has really come on a treat. :) I still enjoy playing your "Me and the Birds" from time to time, and recently downloaded it again, after changing computers.

Twang on mate.

Chris


   
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(@barnabus-rox)
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Thanks Chris

a better version of this is posted in hear here

Merry christmas

Trev

Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am


   
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