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(@pixnstrings)
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This song has nothing to do with my life. I'm not really sure where it come from. Probably some past life or something whacky like that but I think the message is good....what do you think

She picks up her things
pulls her clothes from a drawer
Tears are streaming down
shes been here before

screen door closes behind her
she feels empty inside
but she knows it's the right thing to do
and tells the cabby to drive

shes got to get out of this place
she'll make somehow
Leaves behind no sign and no trace
She'll make it somehow
So far away

As she stares out the window
she reflects on her life
To many broken bones
too many bruises
now shes finally realized
finally realized

That she's got to get out of this place
She'll make somehow
leaves behind no sign and no trace
she'll make it somehow
make it somehow
so far away


   
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(@oliver)
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I would tell more about the reason why she left.
She left that place, she's hurting. She's been there before...
The listener doesn't know what she has seen that made her so desperate.
I don't feel any compassion with the girl/women.
She could even be a selfish bitch who left because she made yet
another mistake.


   
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(@pixnstrings)
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Hi Oliver,

Wow, I thought these lyrics spoke loud and clear. Its a story of a woman thats been abused. Who knows, maybe she was evil and deserved it. I"m teasing. No man or woman should ever be beaten.
This actually was the first song I ever wrote. Interesting, I'll keep it in mind. Read it again and see if It makes more sense to you ok?
In any event, thanks for checking it out.I didn't think anybody was going to.

Holding my breath for your reply :D


   
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