I should have known (expectance)

OK so I've posted this as a SSG song, but would welcome everyone's opinion, not just SSG users.

V1
Once I longed for us to be
With nothing at all, alone and free
I never thought it'd be this way
But I should have known…
I should have known….

V2
Together at last, like in my dream
But nothing became quite what it seemed
I never thought it'd be this way
But I should have known…
I should have known….

Chorus
You'd never give yourself to me
My hopes and dreams, you took for free
At every step, moving in the for the kill
Expecting me to bow to your will

V3
I smiled at you, ‘we were meant to be'
Was all I thought, as you took from me
I never thought it'd be this way
But I should have known…
I should have known….

V4
A last ditch effort, now clear to see
Was the final nail, in the coffin of me
And us, and our chance to carry on
I should have known….
I should have known…

Chorus2
You'd never give yourself to me
My hopes and dreams, you took for free
At every step, moving in the for the kill
Expecting me to bow to your will

Chorus/Outro
Expecting me to show you the way
To lead you on to the end of the day
There's no end for us, it's clear to see
You left with my dreams
And now there's just me

As always, comments thoughts suggestions etc. welcomed.

Pete :)