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(@oasisman)
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This is a chorus I've just come up with, I'll try and write verses around later. Let me know what you think.

Don't cry for me
It's not that bad
Let me be
Why you look so sad?

(Repeat x times but on the last chorus add 'Don't cry for me' at the end).


   
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(@smokindog)
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Do you have some music in mind?Kind of get an Alice Cooper Vibe here, pretty cool, I like it--the dog

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(@oasisman)
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Yeah, I've got music for it. I'm thinking of the following:

It seems like this forums strips spaces. Each chord is supposed to be struck on the last word of each line, so I've put a load of dots in, in an attempt to line up the chords with the words, which hasn't worked very well. My options say 'html is off' and I'm typing with a fixed-width font, that's why.

Note: I've added and extra word to the front of line 3, 'Just'.

D
xx0232

A7sus4
x02030

Em7
022030 or 022033 (I haven't decided which one I want)

G
320033

....................D
Don't Cry For Me

..................A7sus4
It's not that bad

.................Em7
Just let me be

.........................G
Why you look so sad

or this next progression, which I like better:

....................D
Don't Cry For Me

.................Em7
It's not that bad

................G
Just let me be

.........................D
Why you look so sad


   
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(@anonymous)
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i don't know whether yours was just a typo, but em7 is 022030. 022020 is an em6, or A9, i believe.
i don't know what it is, but i've been really nitpicking everything lately.


   
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(@oasisman)
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Sorry. It's a typo, I was busy at work trying to do two things at once, I'll edit my post.

x22020 is an Em6, which is still a good chord by not the one I want, but can be heard in Jealous Guy by John Lennon.

A9 on the other hand is mostly played like xx2423 or even x22223, I can't give an example of this one.


   
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