Last Heart Standing

nice very nice
" I DON'T WORRY "
" THERE'S NO HURRY "
Might fit a little better but hey this is goood
Well done
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Does what it sets out to do, methinks, and does it very well.

Best,

A :-)

Thanks again Guys,

Now to find some music........

Hi guys,

It was suggested to add another verse to it and change the last two lines in the verses.

Do you think it works better as posted above or this way

Last Heart Standing
Lucy Inkpenã2004

There won't be any branding, on this loving heart of mine
Gonna keep it all locked up, Till further down the line
If you try to find the key, you'll just be wasting time
Cause I ain't seen anything, to make me change my mind.

I heard my friends talking; about how much they're in love
How God had sent them, Angels from above
Then a short time later, they're the devils in disguise
Think I'll hang on to my heart, still got loads of time

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I'll have the last heart standing
Cause I ain't standing in line
I don't worry, theres no hurry
To lose this heart of mine
To heartache, from heartbreak
Really blows my mind
I'll have the last heart standing
Cause I ain't standing in line

Went to see a movie, I was waiting in the line
When somebody pushed me, landed me on my behind
His hand came out to help, saying really sorry miss
His voice was deep and sexy; those lips were made to kiss

I smiled, said that's alright, But looks like the lines moved on
Then he up and asked me, if I was all alone
I answered him, yes I am, He said how about a drink
Then I looked into his eyes, I didn't have to think

I'll have the last heart standing
Cause I ain't standing in line
It sure ain't bad and I'm so glad
To lose this heart of mine
To someone, from no one
Really blows my mind
I'll have the last heart standing
Cause I ain't standing in line

:)

YES YES YOUR SECOND ATTEMPT IS MUCH MUCH BETTER IT SEEMS TO FLOW BETTER AND SAYS MORE TO THE READER

WELL I THINK SO

CHEERS