This one has been bouncing around for a while, just never got around to posting it. Enjoy.
Liquid Meltdown
Copyright ©2004 Martin Hillman
I keep running away from you
You think you're running away from me
Still the distance grows no larger
Go play in someone else's sandbox
Let me have my liquid meltdown
On the rocks
We could have been so good together
But we've passed our now or never
Banging my head on my wall
Wishing that the axe would fall
We're just stuck here in mid countdown
So let me have my liquid meltdown
On the rocks
We both know it can't work between us
Yet every time I turn around
There you are with your back to me
Telling me to leave you alone
Go preach from someone else's soapbox
Let me have my liquid meltdown
On the rocks
We could have been so good together
But we've passed our now or never
We're just stuck here in mid countdown
Let me have my liquid meltdown
We're just stuck here in mid countdown
Let me have my liquid meltdown
On the rocks
Yeah, we could have been so good together
But we've passed our now or never
We're just stuck here in mid countdown
Let me have my liquid meltdown
We're just stuck here in mid countdown
Let me have my liquid meltdown
On the rocks
He not busy being born is busy dying. - Bob Dylan (It's Alright Ma, I'm Only Bleeding)
To me personally something missing... don't know exactly what it is but somethings not there... otherwise i enjoyed this song... could you tell me what kind of tempo and music type you had in your head when you wrote it? if you dont wanna do reply on MB just Pm me :D
It's 15 Till And She Has The Other 45 In Her Mouth.
Hi, Maxwell,
I like the sandbox/ soapbox idea, and think that could have been devloped a little more with a final verse or a bridge.
Best,
A :-)
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