Here it goes...
We are stars thrown across the earth.
Who knows how long we'll burn this time.
You will leave your mark and I'll leave mine;
Who knows how long we'll burn this time.
Watch the headlights passing in the night
That fill the falling rain with sparks of light.
A thousand stars of reason break like glass
A thousand lives in silence quickly pass.
Chorus
And there is nothing here but dust on dust;
Still, I hold you in my heart, a lover's trust.
And I believe in you, believe in you:
The spirit recognizes all things true.
Watch me curl beside you as I sleep,
Be the last to feel my heart beat,
Wear the moon's white face as we embrace;
Your presence at the end will be my escape...
eh its not complete but theres some of it :lol:
It's 15 Till And She Has The Other 45 In Her Mouth.
Hiya,
I like the repeated line in the first verse, and reckon you could do more with that idea - especially with the "be the last to feel my heart beat" line.
No ideas for a title, though.
Best,
A :-)
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hey Dilly,
sweet sentiment here. i really like it, a bit biased since i am a hopeless romantic (emphasis on the hopeless part).
as far as title goes you could use something like "burn", "dust on dust", or "in my heart". just a thought. maybe it will spark something for you.
-CheapThrill
i like the "dust on dust" idea that Cheapthrill suggested. that sounds good for a title
great songwriting, by the way
Oh I'm gonna buy this place and start a fire/ Stand here until I hear all your heart's desires/
/Because I'm gonna buy this place and see it burn/ And do back all it did to you in return - Coldplay
Good song again and like the others dust on dust for a title It sounds interesting and origanal. Take care. Nite..............
lyrics belong in songs, poems bolong in bookstores
Dust On Dust it is then lol
It's 15 Till And She Has The Other 45 In Her Mouth.
i am so glad that i could have been of service to you for a title. :D
-CheapThrill
(of ssg)
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wow man...thats really good ...the imagery is superb......suggestions for a title....um......well if i was u id try to think wot the song is about....i mean........it seems there are a few main themes....of nature and love....so if theres a way of putting them together ....sorry cant think of examples..................lol ........................ keep postin tho id love to hear more!!
NeM
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