Hi, I think you have a very catchy lyric here. My only problem is nothing really stands out and grabs my attention to want to look it over again. Mayb...

Looks more like a poem to me with a riddle in it. It is very interesting but as a song, well i', just not sure...................Take care Nite..........

Basically it made me feel there is a bully who is good with words but when it comes down to it. He is afraid to fight. thought the write was interesti...

Thanks for the input, I kinda thought the first 2 verses were to generic also. But after i completed the lyric they seemed to fit. Thanks again. Nite....

Hey,Alan real good stuff. I havent been around for a while but I always liked your writing. This lyric seems to put me on the train. My only suggestio...

First of all I didnt listen to it yet but I love the lyric . It has great heartfelt emotion in it. As far as playing an instrument. I was having troub...

Hummmm, comfortable numb. Great writing I like it. Ken

Thanks for the input again Mystic, I think I'll toy with this a little yet. Thanks again Ken................

Thanks for the input. Glad you liked it. Nite...............

Thanks slowplay,yeah I liked the part about wishing for a dollar back to.I still trying to figure a way to incorperate some how. Thanks again Nite.......

Very well written but as been said the lyric almost needs an explanation before it is read or sang. Which I think could be cured with one verse in the...