Say Goodbye (now with mp3)

First of all I didnt listen to it yet but I love the lyric . It has great heartfelt emotion in it. As far as playing an instrument. I was having troubles getting melodies to my lyrics. So I went and bought an aqoustic and an electric guitar last winter and played and played. I still have a lot to learn. But at least I can put some type of melody together.Whats cool about learning is there are so many free sites on the net. That are very understandable.Anyway great job. Ken...........

Well first of all when I read it I was having troubles making it flow for some reason. but the way you sung it worked out perfect. nicley done. I love it extremely nice!

Nice work, rocket!

I wish I had some constructive critisim for you, but I really can't find anything wrong with it. It's honest, open, and will connect with a lot of people. (By the way, you have a very nice voice... I didn't even mind the country tinge.)

I wouldn't mess with the song too much, but some people may not be as receptive to the openness, by which I mean the absence of metaphore in your verses. I don't personally feel it's a problem, especially with your beautifully vivid chorus as contrast, but it's something to keep in mind for future writing.

Again, good work. Keep recording. Thanks for openning yourself up.