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Say Goodbye (now with mp3)

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(@rocketgirl)
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Say Goodbye

Holding on
Without a say
Take me with you
On your way

What is lost
While we're apart
Is heaven strong enough
To hold your heart

Sky you walk on
Clouds to sleep on
Angels will help you to fly
Letting go is never easy
Harder to say goodbye

Oh, say goodbye
Oh, say goodbye

Close my eyes
To see you again
Live in my dreams
Friend til the end

I'll be alone
Until the day
We meet once more
I'll be okay

Life will life on
I'll have to go on
Angels will help me get by
Letting go is never easy
Harder to say goodbye

BRIDGE
With God's love
Knowing you're above
I'll get through
Just like I always do

Oh, say goodbye
Oh, say goodbye

Sky you walk on
Clouds to sleep on
Angels will help you to fly

If you want to listen to vocals only, here it is
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=341688


   
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(@nitetrapper)
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Joined: 20 years ago
Posts: 149
 

First of all I didnt listen to it yet but I love the lyric . It has great heartfelt emotion in it. As far as playing an instrument. I was having troubles getting melodies to my lyrics. So I went and bought an aqoustic and an electric guitar last winter and played and played. I still have a lot to learn. But at least I can put some type of melody together.Whats cool about learning is there are so many free sites on the net. That are very understandable.Anyway great job. Ken...........

lyrics belong in songs, poems bolong in bookstores


   
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(@mezlay)
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Posts: 37
 

Well first of all when I read it I was having troubles making it flow for some reason. but the way you sung it worked out perfect. nicley done. I love it extremely nice!


   
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(@slowplay)
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Joined: 19 years ago
Posts: 420
 

Nice work, rocket!

I wish I had some constructive critisim for you, but I really can't find anything wrong with it. It's honest, open, and will connect with a lot of people. (By the way, you have a very nice voice... I didn't even mind the country tinge.)

I wouldn't mess with the song too much, but some people may not be as receptive to the openness, by which I mean the absence of metaphore in your verses. I don't personally feel it's a problem, especially with your beautifully vivid chorus as contrast, but it's something to keep in mind for future writing.

Again, good work. Keep recording. Thanks for openning yourself up.

Ice cream is a dish best served cold.


   
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