You cannot live a perfect day without doing something for someone who will never be able to repay you.
Life is not about what I've done, what I should've done, what I could've done. Its about what I can do and what I will do.
I like the first part
the second part i don't know depends on how you sing it but this is just what I think would improve it just a little
I want you out - 4
I want you gone - 4
Take all your s**t and our stupid love song - 4 and 5
Take all you see cos they're all memories - 4 and 4
D**m you I want you, but you're not what I need - 5 but 5
I don't know maybe not but when I read it without love it seems to go more smoothly but it's nothing really. ya it's really not bad though I like it. I'd like to hear it played. keep up the writing! :D