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It Won't Be Long - (My best work I think)

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(@oasisman)
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This song was spawned from my previous one, "It's A Cruel World Out There" (check the middle section of that song), I think this is my best work thus far. Maybe not lyrically but certainly when combined with the chords and melody I've got I think it's the most commercial song I've written. So much so that I might complete this song and get a professional demo recorded.

One thing though, in the second verse I could swap around 'I know so' and 'I hope so', any ideas?

It Won't Be Long
© 2006 P J King

(Verse 1)
Is this how it's gonna turn out?
It can't be
Are you saying that you're having doubts?
I don't see

(Bridge)
Here we go again now
We'll find a way somehow
Well this can't be the end

(Chorus)
It won't be long, it won't be long
It won't be long, it won't be long
Yeah it won't be long, it won't be long
Till I'm there with you

(Verse 2)
I will love you till the end of the sun
I know so
Are you saying that I'm the only one?
I hope so

(Bridge 2)
Here we go again now
We will find out somehow
Well I don't wanna to wait

(Repeat Chorus)

(Guitar Solo)

(Repeat Bridge)

(Repeat Chorus)

(Repeat Chorus)

(Outro)


   
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(@nitetrapper)
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Hi, I think you have a very catchy lyric here. My only problem is nothing really stands out and grabs my attention to want to look it over again. Maybe with the music it would do so . Just my opinion Keep or Sweep. Nite.............

lyrics belong in songs, poems bolong in bookstores


   
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(@oasisman)
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Yep, I know what you mean, there's not much substance to it, but with the music and melody it's very catchy.

That's what I like about it because it's so catchy, when I wrote the first verse, bridge and chorus, I couldn't sleep that night, the melody was stuck in my head.

This has never happend to me before, so I'm a little up beat about it, as I said in my original post, it's not that good lyrically.

If you have any ideas for enhancements let me know.

Cheers.


   
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