lookin down on blueridge avenue

Hey look a song. written kinda fast after a burst of inspiration when i heard the word clown... feedback would be awesome
(if this an anyway offends somebody, I apologize in advance)

A million clowns
A billion frowns
Watched as each
fell outta my reach
taken by the endless void
gone away annouced the freud

and now Im amongst you
lookin down on blueridge avenue
crucified, look upon with scorn
but im missin my crown of thorns

A Billion Galaxies
a trillion fallacies
felt the intrigue
another part atrophied
witherd away to nothingness
I gently wait now for abyss

and now Im amongst you
lookin down on blueridge avenue
crucified, look upon with scorn
but im missin my crown of thorns

Two small cuts
a million thoughts
never though such bliss
could come from razors kiss
now im marchin on to hell
and guess what, you fail

and now Im amongst you
lookin down on blueridge avenue
crucified, look upon with scorn
but im missin my crown of thorns

-Micheal :)